Is it working? small thiner lines? look at actually moving the object than just sitting there?

Maybe start looking at curving the lines as they come down than diagonal ? Each colour will represent a voice and look at colour depending on the strength of the words and movement on speed of the person.

I feel this need to reverse so the lines are coming back to each other than starting back to were they orignal started and they change to new person aswell.

Think i want to round the corners like my poster early on the project.